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Working: Vol. 4, No. 4 - Issue 16 Winter 2025

An Uninvited Guest

Issue 15
I sat with your mother’s mother
Abandoned by those who claimed to be
Too brittle to keep her company
As she died in my arms
Cancer wreaked her intestines
 
 
After a summer
As a survival camp counselor
for disadvantaged children
With the putative sire
A powerless hulk in tow
You came home pregnant
 
Masked shoals of submerged choices
Preclude a call to action
“It’s all my fault,” you said
You chose to send him home
And legally declared yourself
Intent and on the way to college
As an emancipated minor
To be more loan-worthy
Asked, can you keep my room intact
As if it were a sanctuary
 
Ready as I was to stop
Cheating on everyone
And divorce your mother
Buried in a total disorder or ruined values
Untimely for me
 
My refugee parents I suppose
Could have tried harder
Provided more for me
Yet I respected that
They did their best
To come to terms
With what was
The Great Depression
 
I loved them
They loved me
Claimed poverty
They chose to deny life to my three aborted siblings
Not my place to judge
 
For you my daughter
In the shadow
Cast by my infidelity
Misled by entitlement
For you it might be easy
To be self-righteous
For me it is hard to contain
An instinct for vengeance
 
Dismayed not to be consulted
Before you and your mother opted for the abortion
I put aside though barely in my mind
The unremitted notion of
Grandparents raising your child
Which unconscionably
Might resurrect my presumed obligation
That of a captain on a sinking ship
 
My self-estranged daughter
You have become an uninvited guest
At a party to celebrate your birthday
You are the center of attention
Just what you want
 
Lost souls
We stay in touch
Long enough
To define lifelong roles
Responding like
A betrayed friend might
Without empathy
 
My parents deferred to me
As if I were a learned professor
Agreed to immediately bequeath their nest egg savings
To my children
A symbolic gesture of sworn loyalty
Upon my promise that
I would pledge to maintain them
A legacy which you used later
To secure a rural property
 
My near fatal accidental distracted precipice plunge
Off a fast new racing bike
Left me with a fractured vertebra and a halfmoon forehead gash
Long-term vertigo
Brought you to see me in the trauma center
Where you picked dried blood from my hair
A loving act which
Interrupted my desolation
 
You are the product of whimsical unprotected sex
We should have known better
A diehard romantic
Drawn to memorable daring
I was to blame
Not your mother
I forgave myself
Your mother spared me
From promulgating a despising family tradition
As I recalled
No one voiced the thought of
Voiding your existence
 
I loved you with my heart and soul
My self-estranged daughter
Now an uninvited guest
At an unattended party
To celebrate your birthday
Where you still
Are the center of attention
Just what you wanted
 
To second guess or malign you
With my rocky second half-life transition
Would’ve been hypocrisy
Sadly, you are a widow now living on a memorial property
Seeded by my parents’ generosity
With your pious mother, her Orthodox husband, a caterer,
Who both tried to withhold my reciting
At your brother’s synagogue confirmation service
Until your brother
With no prompting
Insisted or he wouldn’t participate.
Even after I’d agreed
To a religious divorce release
For her to remarry compliant with the Orthodox protocol
 
Our wedding was unlike yours
To an unheralded rock musician
In a country style facility
Near Woodstock
Which I borrowed money to fund
 
Our wedding lacked joy
With frenetic friends
The gaping Rabbi’s mouth
Flapping Hebrew words
We were the first of our friends to marry
My poor boy’s vision of
A detour wedding night
At Motel on the Mountain
A room on a platform
Embedded on a slope
A defiance of my fear of heights
And lost innocence
 
Whimsical unprotected sex with your virgin mother
We should have known better
A diehard romantic I was
Drawn to memorable daring
I forgave myself
Though your mother spared me 
From conspiring with you
To kill an unborn child
A family tradition
 
My estranged daughter
You are an uninvited guest
At an unattended party to celebrate your birthday
Where you are the center of attention
Just what you wanted
A flower child widow now living in a memorial property
With your pious mother, and her Orthodox husband, a caterer,
Who tried to deny my attendance at your brother’s confirmation
Synagogue service until your brother insisted or he wouldn’t do it
Even after I’d agreed
To a religious divorce release
For her to remarry as an Orthodox Jew
 
Our wedding was unlike yours to a failed musician
At Woodstock
Which I borrowed money to fund
Our wedding lacked joy
With frenetic relatives
The gaping Rabbi’s mouth
Flapping foreign words
The first of our friends to marry
At their own table
My poor boy’s vision
A detour wedding night
At Motel of the Mountain
A platform room embedded on a slope
 
Defiance of my fear of heights
To upgrade the solemnity of dispensing with a maidenhead
Followed by a rental car pilgrimage
To an offseason beachside cottage on Long Beach Island
With fresh seafood, nature, protected sex and fishing
Confirmed my new identity
 
We each try to shape our givens
Survive and prosper
Wish for tolerance and understanding
Be honored as parents
 
You were entitled to life
As were my unborn siblings
I did my best
I overcame misfortune
After my great fall
Humbled
Grateful to continue to exist
I respect creation and lineage
 
Peace of mind to me is
Love expressed for another being
As they love you
I forgive all
But a wall
You built
Which I can’t climb

MEL EINHORN won 1st Place of the Poetry Writing Contest. Haunted by insistent sensations, intrigued by streams of consciousness, the poet considers estrangement, emancipation, high respect, great esteem.

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